Amazing!
I can see that you are very very good at making backgrounds and doing special effects. The soundeffects went very very good along the animation too and that's very important!
I think you're better at your backgrounds and stuff than at your character drawing (but hey, the character drawing is also still very cool, but just not as good I think).
Very cool story. It makes me want to see the following episodes. Curiousss.
The music is very very cool too and it fits the type of animation also! You're a all in one artist (like me.. I also do music and flash and drawing and stuff) and I like that.
Keep up the good work! I'll put this one in my favorites!
Greets,
Rubbertje (from Xyion)